Yes, I knew about the conditions of factory farms before watching these movies.
The reason there are so many factory farms is because they are money makers and gives the owners maximum profit .I think,government has to make big decision to stop factory farming because this is a harmful thing for human life. These are factory farming make human life short.
I always very careful about what I eat . I do not have to do any research but of course I would like to know how If other people are aware of the condition in the food factory. People need to get involved and safe their health and the environment .
Yes, We have to stop buying these kinds of food. Second, government should take action against these inhuman and unhealthy food factory farm. Yes, It is a serious problem because of factory food contains a lot of harmful hormones . If our families are exposed to these hormones they can be detrimental to our health.
No I will not making any changes in my eating habit because I do not buy or eat meat another items that comes from factory farms
This is good because you describe the topic clearly. but you didn't have clear reflection. other way you blog post is nice.
ReplyDeletestopping factory is not very necessary, it is necessary to prevent environment and health of human. it is tend to factory farm. it can get maximum profit in a short time.
ReplyDeleteyour essay is good but you didn't write introduction.
ReplyDeleteyou didn't gave any introduction.your summary is okay.you give good conclusion.
ReplyDeleteYou don't write enough summery but you have fantastic reflection. I agree with you that we should think about our health.
ReplyDeleteyou have good pictures to show factory farm, and you also point what is bad of factory farm.
ReplyDeleteNice blog post. I like it.
ReplyDeleteIt's better you write the introduction and summary of the meatrix movies.
wow, i like the pictures, and i agree with, but you did not have introduction.
ReplyDeleteYes. I strongly agree with you opinion. We have to help family farms and use organic products for us.
ReplyDeleteThe meatrix show almost people have to respect a life their animals because these pictures show them the realty the animals
ReplyDeleteI agree you that It is a serious problem because of factory food contains a lot of harmful hormones idea . you have a clear idea and you also develop you idea. but there isn't summary in you essay. sentence and grmmar is great.
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ReplyDeleteas far i i have observed your essay is well organized,but you have to established it by including more detail ideas which would make your arguments more stronger to work with.
i have seen many punctuation problems which have obstructed you ideas to be expressed in a right way...
You have clear idea about these movies but, I think you should write your claim by the end of the introduction Which I dont see it clearly. ou didnot write a clear summery. You have to talk about the main ideas in the body paragraph.You have issues with the grammer
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